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look what i wrote

bunnigirlbunnigirl
posted 1 decade 2 months ago
ok so i have found this wonderful woman who can make cards

so i asked her if she would make me some for dominics bday in a few weeks and she has but i also asked if i could write the poem to go inside and she said yeah and it took me ages but this is what i came up with


Baby boy
The day your were born I was full of love
It was like you were sent from a little dove
Your tiny fingers and toes start to grow
Your cute little features started to show
Now 5 years on you are a little man
And I alone am your no1 fan
But please don’t grow up so fast
Because I want this feeling to last and last

what do u think ?

xxxx


Kelly_CaitKelly_Cait
posted 1 decade 2 months ago
Awww I think that is really sweet Thumbs Up

bunnigirlbunnigirl
posted 1 decade 2 months ago
thanks babe i wanted something special and meaningful and i dont think shop brought ones say it

this is the first time i have ever wrote anything and i am so proud

xxx

gypseygypsey
posted 1 decade 2 months ago
Crying that brought tears to my eyes thats lovely

soupsoup
posted 1 decade 2 months ago
thats lovely Love

CharlieloveCharlielove
posted 1 decade 2 months ago
so cute Thumbs Up

hapydazyhapydazy Moderator
posted 1 decade 2 months ago
That's really good!! Love

candgsmumcandgsmum
posted 1 decade 2 months ago
Aw hun, thats so lovely Love

bunnigirlbunnigirl
posted 1 decade 2 months ago
thanks girls like i said i wanted something meaning ful and i was glad i managed it LOL

xxx

AlexAlex Moderator
posted 1 decade 2 months ago
That is lovely Love

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